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often i am bullied but there is one set of bullies from my beginning highschool till a year well past of graduation where these bullies have stuck out and harrassed me to the point of law enforcement...

i'd like to thank everyone for all the faves and views- over 80 veiws and 15 faves in record timeing of 30 mins! thank you all!
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kylexcraig Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
beautiful
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BIackFang Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2012  Professional General Artist
thank you :)
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BlackMoon705 Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
I actually beat a kid in middle school a week or so ago, i'm pretty laid back, and not a fighter. but for some reason i love punching and shit. wtf.
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BIackFang Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2012  Professional General Artist
depending on the situation maybe its because you feel the need to be powerful- like your somebody when you have total control- possibly due to lack of being when with parents or friends- sometimes lack of attention where you feel you need it? it's normal but saddly, not practical-( im just a recent highschool grad) but because i come across as a weak person in the general veiw people think they will gain friends if they pick on the weaker people... idk.... i'd like to know what you think...
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BlackMoon705 Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
i'm not sure. i didn't start until the kid kept making comments about me for four days, and when he came at my friends i beat him up. he's defiantly not weak, and i don't like going for weaker kids. i don't like going for anyone, really. but as bad as it sounds, it feels good to hit someone once in awhile. not that it IS good. i have a bad temper..
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BIackFang Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012  Professional General Artist
i understand that. i used to have a bad temper as well. i hated when people picked on me- and i fought back. over time though... i learned to control it because i wanted to be in public school again no matter the cost. i was taken out of school my 6th year and not put back in till 10th- its a hard thing to deal with but if you can find away to get them into trouble without actually involving anything bad on your part- it gives some motif but none thats negative
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skydiving6pwnsall Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This sounds like a song :music: love it!
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BIackFang Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2012  Professional General Artist
lol i hadnt inteneded it to be but alot of people have been saying it as well! lol maybe its a hint for me to get it a song-
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skydiving6pwnsall Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Great beat xD
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sumarlegur Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
oh no.
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BIackFang Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2012  Professional General Artist
whats oh no mean?
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Mad4TheMadHatter Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012  Student Writer
beautiful
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:iconbiackfang:
BIackFang Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2012  Professional General Artist
thank you!
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ScreW-LoGic Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012
A couple of grammatical errors, but I liked it.
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BIackFang Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2012  Professional General Artist
lol
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vergilusphoenix Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This can be actually applied to emotional bullies as well,

Very nice I liked how every line down true to the emotions :3
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BIackFang Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2012  Professional General Artist
i agree :) i guess it depends from which angle you look at it.
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AbyssWolf666 Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012  Student General Artist
It kind of comes of as arrogant and overconfident, but i guess i'm not one to talk when i am more arrogant and cocky than anyone i know, although i'v only had to deal with personal bullies once but that ended quickly because i broke them. Kudos though, the only part i don't like is the "better than you" parts.
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BIackFang Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2012  Professional General Artist
thats pride that speaks unfortunatly- i was mad and hurt when i wrote it. i was just writing and trying to boost my own self confidence and it worked. idk- like idk why i have bullies but i do and the sad part is now it's taken a legal stand- and they pushed it- idk- its been a nightmare with them :(
thank you for the input :)
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falsewarrior Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I was bullied to. not as seveir. They just frightened me. I never lost confidence in my self. But there was a time I the guy punched me. Ow....
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BIackFang Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2012  Professional General Artist
yea ive had that happen on numourus occasions- im sorry to hear that but i am happy that you kept self confidence- there are times when we will get pushed by opposing sides- the point is- it's supposed to make us stronger when we learn how to deal with those particular situations- i dont always like it and im sure all would agree- but in the end it will either break us or make us :)
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alice-snow-kiss88 Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012
for you ---> [link]
I was bullied to.
these are my words . . . inspired by yours.
thank you :blushes:
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BIackFang Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2012  Professional General Artist
no problem- i love it very much!
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alice-snow-kiss88 Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2012
thank you ^-^
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ArtofDezzy Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012
I love it, so beautiful :)
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BIackFang Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2012  Professional General Artist
thank you :)
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ArtofDezzy Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2012
Sure thing
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bandgirlrocksdeworld Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I love the passion you present in this! Makes me feel stronger just READING it! :w00t: Thank you for posting this! :glomp:

FYI: 8th line counting up from the bottom, you've got a random letter 'y' in the word 'it'. Just thought I'd tell you...doesn't affect how awesome this is though! :)
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BIackFang Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2012  Professional General Artist
lol. im glad i could help! passion and emotion- i believe that if you put the right amount- you get the perfect song :)
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blacksoul4321 Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012
:iconclapplz: Very well done.
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BIackFang Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2012  Professional General Artist
hahaha- thank you very much!
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blacksoul4321 Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2012
Your very welcome.
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BIackFang Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2012  Professional General Artist
:)
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blacksoul4321 Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2012
:iconnoooplz:
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lindsey12325 Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I love how well the rythm and the message support each other! It is very often hard for a piece of literature on the front page to attract my attention and then affect me so much since i dislike poems and rap. But this is an exception :D
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BIackFang Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2012  Professional General Artist
well- my eyes are wide open and super happy that i captured even harder readers like you to my work! thank you so very very much for reading it! and thanks alot for the input too! it makes me super happy!
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lindsey12325 Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Lol no problem, especially with such a poem/rap that applies even to me :)
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heartandsoulforher Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012  Student General Artist
why not just go ahead and turn it into an oldschool rock an roll song?
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BIackFang Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2012  Professional General Artist
lol- ok lets see what we can find!
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xXBleedingxAngelXx Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012
:) im a fighter.
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BIackFang Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2012  Professional General Artist
good! good! yes!
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pearl-whisper Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is great! Keep being strong!
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:iconbiackfang:
BIackFang Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2012  Professional General Artist
thank you! and i will!
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PelicanBear Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Fighters are always the strongest.... Hopefully they got the hint after the law was brought in.
This is a sharp piece!
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BIackFang Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2012  Professional General Artist
well see the problem is is they brought it in first- they are so adiment that i get in trouble that they sat at a convienent store for 15 mins waiting to pick a fight when i got back out- then accused me of scratching their truck and went to the station to press charges- lol its rediculus-
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XxKASHxX Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012  Student Digital Artist
$10 I'm smarter than you, but I'd just be killing myself by saying I'm stronger =.=
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BIackFang Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012  Professional General Artist
lol ?
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XxKASHxX Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012  Student Digital Artist
where's my money?
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:iconbiackfang:
BIackFang Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012  Professional General Artist
im broke :)
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